Week 2 of the Blog O Rama hosted by Deana Barnhart is under way with a Story Chain. We are given assignments and times to post by, basing our post on the excerpt(s) before ours, and each person has to come up with something in as little as 15 min. With the creative juices of so many writers, the final story is sure to be great!!
For the excerpt before me go to A.E. Martin
My assignment:
Have the MC interact with someone or something.
Your words are: tv, chest, brace
They entered the forest and the little flashlight flickered until it died. "Oh no!" Dio said, as darkness enveloped them.
"I was afraid of that," Roddan said. "Electronics don't work in a fae forest."
Dio thought about using her magic light to guide them, but her mother had warned her to use it sparingly, else she'd become sleepy.
"We need a torch," Dio said.
They felt around and Roddan found a stick. Recalling a TV episode of Survivorman, Dio gathered enough Spanish Moss at the base of a tree to wrap around the stick.
"Now for a spark," she said, bracing herself for the tingle in her body. She focused her light toward the moss until it lit.
"You did it!" Roddan said.
Dio eyed Roddan over the flames and gasped. His shirt was missing and strange markings glowed upon his chest.
For the next excerpt go to Suspending Disbelief
Whoa...a shirtless man thrown in the mix. This is gonna get interesting. :P
ReplyDeleteWhaa...
ReplyDeleteNow where did that shirt of his go:)
Fun additions! Good use of your words--they were hard!
ReplyDeleteOh, wow! So did she put the strange markings on his chest or just make his shirt disappear ...
ReplyDeleteLove the twist.
Lol, Alleged Author! Christina, love what you did with the 'light' and nice, compelling leave off--can't wait to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteHa! So funny, bringing in Survivorman for that moss.
ReplyDeleteOoh, shirtless sexy guy...I loved the bit about survivorman too. THat was awesome ^_^
ReplyDeleteHmmm, I thought we were supposed to be PG-13. Too bad, because the shirtless sexy guy who no longer smells like rotten eggs could become very interesting.
ReplyDeleteNow you've got us all wondering. . .
ReplyDeleteThis was the PERFECT story for you to add your glow to!
ReplyDeleteLeaving us in suspense over a sexy yet stinky guy without a shirt....well done :)
ReplyDeleteI love how you managed to get TV in there. Survirorman makes me think of Bear Grylls :)
ReplyDeleteLove the mystical elements too.
Oooh, love the markings. And Survivorman!
ReplyDeleteI like the introduction of a bit of mystery surrounding Roddern.
ReplyDeleteThe strange markings are a great addition to the story.
ReplyDeleteNice added twist at the end, and I love the reference to Survivorman. I always hope I'll be able to use something I learned from that show some day.
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